
Originally Posted by
WideMonk
The first one sounds best to me, although we've never done any bag-packing so I cant offer experience.
The second one mentions about raising funds but leaves a big question 'what for?'
The third one is OK except... what are the customers gonna do, a 'lap' round the bucket just to read it all ?? And its a bit too much to put all on one face.
The last one.. its not 'to-the-point' enough.
If it were me, I'd stick with the first example.
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Just another quick thought. Why bother mentioning the bag packing services.
If your kids are in uniform, surely it's pretty obvious what they're doing so wouldn't just this suffice:-
[Name] Scout Group
Donations Welcome
Thank You
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